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Quiet Wishes

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Model - Me

Photographer - ~a3sthetik
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Im so excited to critique a fellow nude model! So I'll be looking at this from your perspective. I love the idea of the suggestive nude and though others may show the breasts I like that you're subtly covering yours. It actually looks quite natural the way your legs and arms are placed, your stomach looks great girl! I wanna know your routine because I've been working on toning mine forever. You've got great skin and I really think you've got a beautiful strong face that you're using very well in this shot. The only suggestion I have is that with your legs despite them being curled up and in the darkness we can still see a whole leg, with yours arms though both of them are mostly hidden. I think it would be nice to have one of the extended the way your leg is otherwise you start getting the amputated look. I think it can work with one limb- because with the other limb extended you take the hint of the bent limb. So maybe putting your left hand on the bed spread would keep with the general curled up theme and not shorten your limbs too much- but that's really just based off of critiques I've gotten myself.

I really enjoy this, it's beautiful and subtle. Thanks!